Tuesday, October 04, 2005

Perfect- the shortest story....

Herez my shortest post with a 55 word short story...

He looked absolutely charming in the wedding attire. She had dreamt of this since the day she had first met him and all through the years they were in love. Everything was perfect, the beautiful spring day, the flowers, the birds, their music and ofcourse him. Everything except that she was not the bride!

I was tagged by Rajeev and I proceed to tag Sindhu and VJ.

7 comments:

Lazy Lavender said...

Hey Ash!! Really nice one di...Pretty touching....I liked it...

Labakku Das said...

Decent.. in fact shud say good.. u have responded quickly..

Naren Balaji said...
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Naren Balaji said...

A good original story. keep writing

Aravind said...

Hi,
pretty nice.short and sweet(rather not so for the lady in there).

Heidi Kris said...

really sad :( Pray its jus a story.

sowmya said...

wow!! what a anti-climax, twist and ending within that one line :p